DO OUR STORY WAS GOOD ENOUGH? We know that our English was bad! This is Our Draft... PLEASE CHECK IT OUT!!!?

by pam



Posted by Sierra girl at: 2007-12-30 19:37:25
it too long even tho i did not read it i give thumbs up cause it long and stuff


Posted by duh... ♥♥♥♥♥ at: 2007-12-30 19:41:45
it was good.duh (i didnt really read it)


Posted by all work and no play at: 2007-12-30 19:44:26
Sorry, I don't have the time or energy tonight to readwhat was it, 47 pages? Though it shows potential that you're willing to write that much. I do have to say, there is some brilliant stuff in here, very poeticsome of the better writing on "do you like this?" questions. There are tense issues and some telling-not-showing situations on occasion, but overall there is something that shines through the grammatical stuff. I have a writer's forum and we're really hard up for members. I go there often to check so if you want to join that would be great. You can post all the stories you want on there. http://breathesmoke.freeforums.org


Posted by gary 7 infiltrator - AM at: 2007-12-30 20:25:47
Too long. Didn't read. People don't come to YA to read fifty-page short stories.


Posted by dammarhuyu at: 2007-12-31 08:57:51
You have chance keep on going

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